This entire fic is cute and funny, but it's the Keith/Logan interaction that really gets me. I'm a sucker for them together in any form, but sometimes I think fic writers soften up their relationship too much, make it too sugary. But you got it just right. Keith is the perfect amount of wary and disapproving (after all, Logan made his daughter's life a living hell for a whole year) while still being accepting of Logan, and clearly liking him at the core of things. This entire exchange:
"How come she gets to take him? I can take him somewhere."
Stopping on his way out the door, Logan leaned into Wallace. "You gonna make out with me?"
Wallace did another full body-shiver and this one was real enough. "I’ll pass."
Logan shrugged, "Then Veronica it is. See ya, Wally. Keith." Shaking her head in silent laughter, Veronica just waved as they walked out the door.
"Don’t call me Wally," Wallace ordered under his breath once they were gone.
"Don’t call me Keith," Keith muttered at the same time.
Cracked my shit up, and had me squealing at the awesomeness of Logan's impertinence, just like I do on the show. Fabulous.
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Date: 2006-09-24 06:50 pm (UTC)"How come she gets to take him? I can take him somewhere."
Stopping on his way out the door, Logan leaned into Wallace. "You gonna make out with me?"
Wallace did another full body-shiver and this one was real enough. "I’ll pass."
Logan shrugged, "Then Veronica it is. See ya, Wally. Keith." Shaking her head in silent laughter, Veronica just waved as they walked out the door.
"Don’t call me Wally," Wallace ordered under his breath once they were gone.
"Don’t call me Keith," Keith muttered at the same time.
Cracked my shit up, and had me squealing at the awesomeness of Logan's impertinence, just like I do on the show. Fabulous.